Christina and angelica's rough cut

Strengths:

• Establishing shots are well placed
• Good use of natural light to give an eerie feel
• Text effects are impressive, the way they jitter in gives the viewer the sense of a horror or maybe supernatural film
• Font used also gives of supernatural feel
• Placement of props (drills, blocks of wood) describe a gritty, workshop environment
• Doesn't give away too much of the story and not too little

Weaknesses:

• Music is good at the beginning but loses dramatic effect when the strings come in
• Shot after the title "something wicked" doesn't seem to have a lot going on or anything interested to catch the eye compared to the other shots

Recommended changes

• Replace shot after main title with new establishing shot or remove the shot
• Keep the music nice and simple without the need for strings or find a way to make the strings fit more with the overall loop (i'm not sure whether you guys made it with garageband or not)
• Maybe more shots of the protagonist entering the room (more foot shots?)

There doesn't seem to be anything missing, only tweaks are needed. Overally i thought this was a good opening.

CYA!